主题:我写的关于铁问题的research paper,请大家批评指正 -- 鸭绿江
先声明我对是冶金十窍通其九,只是按着自己感觉念着比较顺口来改的,同时也参考了阿嗑和闲来兄弟的建议。可谓众人拾柴火焰高。鸭兄弟对我的修改有啥意见尽管提好了,不到之处还请多多包涵。
Comparison of the History of Iron Smelting in Ancient China and the Western World
Iron is one of the most useful and important natural resources known to mankind. Not only because of its versatilities, but also because of its easy availability the Earth's surface. The Iron Age did not begin until about 1,200 BC. Different regions entered Iron Age in different times. Ancient Chinese had a late start entering this age comparing with Westerners. Regretfully, the usage of iron in ancient China is very often ignored by most scientific historians. Very few comprehensive studies of the history of iron usage and smelting in ancient China are available today. Quite possibly, the iron producing techniques in ancient China were more advanced than that of the Western World. Not long after the ancient Chinese began using it, iron products became more commonly available in China than in the West. In this paper, I will try to explain that the ancient Chinese had quite a few technical advantages in the processing of iron, and its usage in China was popularized faster than in any other parts of the world.
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too many..... oiler2 字312 2006-01-25 01:59:33
【原创】只看了第一段,觉得 2 闲看蚂蚁上树 字858 2006-01-23 22:28:17
很有价值,推荐一下 铁手 字0 2006-01-25 01:01:32
我试着来改写第一段
语句上strong 了, 闲看蚂蚁上树 字381 2006-01-24 12:56:17
nice modification 山寺桃花 字0 2006-01-24 04:12:33
这个问题中国研究得非常彻底,你为什么不看看? 283号出口 字290 2005-03-09 00:08:17
🙂同意闲兄的意见 ArKrXe 字458 2005-03-08 18:19:20