主题：我写的关于铁问题的research paper，请大家批评指正 -- 鸭绿江
家园 绝对不是挑毛病 如果这真的是一门课的作业
有一些语法问题恐怕需要稍微核实一下
比如第一句中的one of the most important... not only...but also...
等等
家园 对不起，忘了写Bibliography了 Bibliography
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Phillips, George Brinton. “The Antiquity of the Use of Iron.” American Anthropologist, New Series, 26, no. 2 (April ?C June 1924): 177.
Read, Thomas T. “Chinese Iron-A Puzzle.” Harvard Journal of Asiatic Studies, 2, no.3/4 (December 1937): 399-403.
Read, Thomas T. “The Early Casting of Iron: A Stage in Iron Age Civilization.” Geography Review, 24, no. 4 (October 1934): 544-552.
Rickard, T. A. “The Primitive Smelting of Iron.” American Journal of Archaeology, 43, no. 1 (January ?C March 1939): 85-88.
Richardson, Harry Craig. “Iron, Prehistoric and Ancient.” American Journal of Archaeology, 38, no. 4 (October - December 1934): 555.
Rostokcr W., et al. “Casting Farm Implements, Comparable Tools and Hardware in Ancient China.” World Archaeology, 15, no. 2 (October 1983): 196.
Wagner, Donald B. “The Earliest Use of Iron in China.” <http://www.stuff.hum.ku.dk/dbwagner/EARFE/EARFE.html>. 1999
这里的主要材料还是Wagner, Donald B.哥们儿的，（他的观点是中国铁器大约在公元前二百年左右）先前的几个只是凑数的，没办法，比起有些人（当然是那些两眼只盯着外国资料的HJ）不知道从那里信手找来的资料要强一些（最可恶的是鲁日尼科夫的，那个22页的文章中居然就把一个期刊号放上去，我知道是哪年哪月的？）我的资料可信度还是要高一些的，
鲁日尼科夫，不知道你看不看的见，不过这个算是我先后和你的观点三次辩论的一个正式回复，有时间看看吧，记得回个话。