主题：【求助】写了一封离职告别信，高手们帮我把把关！ -- DF41

俺觉得非常不妥... 道理兄弟自己去想

你改的比他原来的还要糟。

may后面带Present tense，所以是may already know或may already have known.

so much是特殊句式，一般用法是XXX so much, that xxxx比如：He ran so much that he sprained his ankle.

Upon一般用于条件，如：He left upon receiving the news。

leave 后一般直接带noun。

it指代什么？

will be也不对，应该用present tense

改正后是这样

As some of you may already know, I have submitted my resignation to XXX on Jan.06 and this is my last week here.I have enjoyed working with you very much, and I am leaving here with a mixture of excitement and regret. You've not only been colleagues but dear friends as well.

学语言要注意输入（听读）与输出（说写）的累积，不能光学语法。特别是英语；英语的语法本来就很混乱，没有实际中的运用，是怎么也学不好的。

老大能再帮我改改下面的段落么？ 多谢！

打击你的信心。我当年也是厚着脸皮直接说英语上英文稿的（环境所逼），开始英文很烂，没少闹笑话的。当时有一个受英语教育的朋友，没少埋汰我，但是会指出我的错误。当时很烦他，但是现在还挺感激他的（现在是好朋友，相当铁的哥们）。我指出你的错误也只是基于希望对你有帮助的心态。

当然我自己的总结就是当年因为敢用敢实践所以程度才会上来的。

其实知道自己程度相当可以了发表东西毫不稀奇，但是在不知道自己程度怎么时愿意去实践，这点是需要点精神的。在这点上我很看好你。兄弟，加油！

Dear all,

As some of you may have already known, I have resigned from XXX on Jan.06 and this is my last week here. I am leaving with a mixture of excitement and regret, because I have enjoyed working with all of you very much. You've not just been colleagues but dear friends as well.

Indeed, it has been a pleasure to work with a strong team in the past 3.5 years. Together we’ve provided world-class service to our customers, achieved many challenging goals, shared a rewarding learning experience and we have much to be proud of.

Special thanks to PEKRC Management for all the support, guidance and encouragement. I’ve learned from (可以考虑用through，就是通过您，知道了。。。和从您那儿，知道了。。。的差别） you how a professionally managed project should look like.

I sincerely hope that our friendship will not end with my departure. In the future, I can still be reached via mp#1381025xxxx or email: [email protected]

Best wishes for the coming Chinese New Year! I will miss you all my brother & sisters!

Yours truly,

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你这个差不多了，我只改了三个地方，煮酒胸说得很清楚，其实这种信就是走场面，但是我当你是要练习你的E文吧？

离职了啊，祝你前途似锦。

呵呵，大家都是这么写的。。 都感谢到了就行。

其实下下周才群发我们部门的，提前做个准备，这Farewell其实打从3年多前我入职就开始想有朝一日我也会群发这么一封告别信，所以，每一封我收到的告别信我都留着，

2010这一年下来，每一天几乎都是在挣扎，可以说面试了整整一年，大大小小各种公司，三伏天打着领带挤在没空调的地铁一号线里，浑身湿透，还有很多经历，感觉非常锻炼人，好歹岁末年初有个还算理想的结果，自己也觉得不容易。

现在终于轮到我了发farewell了，呵呵。