主题:帮朋友改的一份 Cover Letter. 也请大家多提 -- 煮酒正熟
欢迎各位继续提出宝贵意见
Dear Martin,
I came across your job posting of a Software Development Team Leader - Embedded C++ position in BBBBB. I am very interested in this position as it gives me an opportunity to best utilize my technical and managerial skills in the software development arena.
With four years of experience as an R&D manager and director in XXX industry, I have lead a team to launch eight products to the market and increased revenue by 15% on a yearly basis. I believe my proven track record of success combined with an updated technical skill set would make me a strong candidate for the position.
Attached please find my resume that summarizes my accomplishments. I will be glad to provide referees contact information at your discretion.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
XXX YYYY
(注:没用 the best match... 而换成 strong candidate for the position,是因为感觉前者有点overkill. 推销自己时的尺度拿捏确实比较有挑战性... 这里再次感谢骨头龙兄弟提出的修改意见)
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🙂Subject应该是job title 1 牛腰 字133 2009-03-31 19:53:56
😁心狠手辣 路人 字198 2009-03-31 19:28:41
😨会有问题吗? 牛腰 字303 2009-03-31 19:48:51
🙂根据骨头龙等兄弟的意见,做了二次修改,
🙂建议 1 闲看蚂蚁上树 字344 2009-04-04 18:53:59
🙂建议 4 晨枫 字722 2009-04-01 21:19:05
🙂Referee的原意类似仲裁者 牛腰 字225 2009-04-01 23:49:44
🙂啊,这个好多了。 1 上课犯睏 字516 2009-04-01 20:21:21