五千年(敝帚自珍)

主题:【求助】写了一封离职告别信,高手们帮我把把关! -- DF41

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家园 写得很好啊

只是一般辞职信很少写这么长的。我的辞职信一般就两段,第一段serve notice,第二段thank you,差不多。有什么感谢的话就约当事人喝茶面谈。帮你改一改时态。

Dear all,

As some of you may have already known, I have resigned my position here on Jan.06 and this is my last week in XXX Company.

I will starting (这里有两个选择,你要不就用will be assuming 或 am assuming。两者差不多,但是am assuming的语气比较确定。start 和 role搭配不当。) a brand new role in another company which will afford me better opportunity for professional and personal development.

I am leaving with a mixture of excitement and regret, because I have enjoyed working with all of you very much. You've not just been valued colleagues but dear friends as well.

Indeed, my stay in XXX company for the past 3.5 years has been deeply fulfilling. It has been a pleasure to work with (或者fight along,fight with有歧义) a

strong team. Together we’ve provided world-class services(要不要加s要视你的工作内容而定) to valued customers, accomplished one goal

after another(建议再简化为many goals), shared a rewarding learning experience; We have much to be proud of.

Special thanks to XXX Management - person name,person name,person name,person name for the numerous support, guidance and encouragement. I’ve learned through you how a professionally managed project should look like.

I trust that our friendship will continue (to grow) after my departure或I trust that we will continue to enjoy a cordial personal relationship after my departure。你自己斟酌一下。主要是friendship will continue不太正规。. You are welcomed to reach me at any time via mp#1381025xxxx or email: [email protected]

Please accept my best wishes in the coming Chinese New Year!

I will miss you all my brother & sisters!

新春快乐!

Yours truly,

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      • 🙂写得很好啊 O



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