主题：【求助】关于实习申请信 -- 文远
家园 【求助】关于实习申请信 小弟在一所德国大学读书，现在想申请一家荷兰公司的实习。我以前没有用英语写过实习申请信，所以希望大家给我提点意见。beta版如下：
Dear Mrs. XXX,
I am writing to apply for a 7 or 8 month traineeship in the solar energy branch
of XXX. I am also enclosing my curriculum vitae.
The opportunity presented on the website of XXX is very interesting, and I
believe that my strong technical experience and education will make me a very
competitive candidate for this position.
I am in the final phase of my study at University Stuttgart, and expecting a
Diplom Ingenieur degree (equivalent to Master of Science) in 2010. The key
strength that I possess for success in this position is my rich laboratory
experience. In my laboratory course of Numerical Field at the Institute for
Theory of Electrical Engineering, I learnt how to build 3D models of electrical
devices and use software like COMSOL Multiphysics to simulate the electrical
fields inside the devices. My laboratory course of Photovoltaic at the
Institute for Physical Electronic has allowed me to gain the skills of
structural analysis and characterization of solar cells. I have also worked 3
month at the Institute for Physical Electronic, researching the concept of low
temperature front side metallization. During this project I have not only
acquired further experience of technologies of the fabrication and
characterization of solar cells, like the screen printing and the TLM method,
but also completed the whole process of a scientific research and understood
the flow of the research. This project has also sharpened my desire to continue
in this field.
While I have plentiful laboratory experience, I have also an innovative
attitude. I read a lot of articles about the solar energy, in magazines or
online, paying great attention to new concepts and progresses of the PV
industry.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you
soon.
Sincerely,
XXX XXX
这家公司的网站上说：XXX is looking for Bachelor and Master students that are in the final period of their study。XXX values an innovative attitude, a broad interest and requires
highly motivated candidates。我应该怎样改动来使自己显得满足这些要求呢？
此外还有一个疑问，这个公司的太阳能部门现在有5个实习位置，每个实习位置的联系人是不同的。如果我同时给
5个联系人写信，是否妥当？或是有什么地方需要注意？
谢谢。
家园 一点意见 如果你是Diplomgang，那么你要找的实习是工业实习，那么和这家公司的要求还是有差距的，他们要的是做毕业实习/毕业论文性质的。如果你读的是Master课程，那么就要看学习计划要求的实习是不是“毕业实习”这样的形式。
另外，我觉得同时发给5个人不太好，因为这5个是一个部门的不同职位，一般来说，在一个部门里最好只申请一个最有把握/兴趣的职位，这样命中率会高一些。
- 复 一点意见
家园 谢谢你的回复和建议。 我确实是Diplomgang，而且要做的就是工业实习。我课程都结束了，只剩下实习和DA。我们院里的规定是必须先完成实习，再做DA。如果这家公司要我做毕业实习或是毕业论文，我也可以做的。做完后，我写成工业实习样子的报告交到院里就可以了。
家园 还是有一点问题 工业实习一般要求至少在5个不同的领域里都做一些相关的事情，这个规定你可以去查一下手册，上面有详细的介绍，各个学校的专业的规定有所不同。所以如果你最终拿到某个位置，还是要和这家单位说好，要你的导师签字证明你在这几个不同的领域里都做过的，中间的协调需要你自己去做的。如果不符合要求，那么你的实习时得不到100%承认的，比如只被承认50%，你还要再补50%的。