主题:【求助】写了一封离职告别信,高手们帮我把把关! -- DF41
小弟英语比较烂,请高手们给看看,哪些地方比较冗长或者语法时态的什么有问题,帮我看一下吧,谢谢!
Dear all,
As some of you may already know, I am resigning my position here on Jan.06 and this week is my last week in XXX Company. I will starting a brand new role in another company which will afford me the opportunity for better personal growth and professional development. I am leaving with a mixture of excitement and regret, because I have greatly enjoyed working with all of you. You've been not just colleagues but my friends as well.
Indeed, over 3.5 years experience in XXX company has been deeply fulfilling. It has been a pleasure to fight with a
strong team. Together we’ve provided world class service to our valued customer, accomplished the great target one
after another, sharing a rewarding learning experience and we have much to be proud of.
Special thanks to PEK Management - person name,person name,person name,person name. You gave me numerous support,
guidance and encouragement that I’ve learned how a really good professional work and project management should be run.
I sincerely hope that our friendship will not end with my departure. I can be reached at any time via mp#1381025xxxx or email: [email protected]
Please accept my best wishes in the coming Chinese New Year!
I will miss you all my brother & sisters!
新春快乐!
Yours truly,
XXX
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🙂【求助】写了一封离职告别信,高手们帮我把把关!
🙂贡献下我几个月前的 3 知之后哀 字621 2011-01-15 23:28:37
🙂多谢各位!再帮我看看 DF41 字1091 2011-01-15 16:31:56
🙂应你的要求 1 天涯睡客 字1214 2011-01-17 06:15:49
🙂谢谢兄弟们,亏了你们给改了改 1 DF41 字399 2011-01-19 02:12:09
🙂抱歉 紫梁 字5 2011-01-15 21:45:25