主题：【求助】写了一封离职告别信，高手们帮我把把关！ -- DF41

俺没细看，但估计你是准备作为email弄群发的

无论是辞职信(resignation letter, 给supervisor or senior management的)，还是告别信(farewell letter, 给coworkers的)，都绝对绝对不宜写的这么长。前者是官面文章，自然没必要写得过长过细，而后者的受众(audience)很广，跨越各部门、不同级别/阶层、包括与你私交较深的和泛泛之交的，弄的过长了，会让所有人--无论是私交深厚的还是一面之交的，都感到别扭。

而且切切不要elaborate on your new position or career. 诸如神马 "...another company which will afford me the opportunity for better personal growth and professional development"。这个话是大忌，会让人觉得你有炫耀甚至觉得自己攀了高枝儿之意，虽然你本来完全不是这个意思。

还有些小语法瑕疵，比如 you may already known

应该是you may have already known，或者you may already know. 后者更简捷。这种东西，simplicity is the King.

其他语法瑕疵就不一一说明了。

我见过的所有老美的辞职信都很简捷，如果想加入一些个人情感因素，可以这样写：

Dear All,

It is with mixed emotions that I'm writing this email message. As some of you know, I have accepted a position at another company，and January 25 will be my last day with XXX. It was not an easy decision for me, as I truly enjoy working with all of you here at [Current Company].

I would like to take this opportunity to thank you all, my friends and colleagues, for your support and friendship. It's been such a pleasure and privilege to work with each of you! I will miss you all... (俺觉得俺已经写的够酸够酸的了，如果你嫌酸的话可以适当tone down一下，但却不可比这个更酸了)

I can be reached at my personal email address ([email protected]) or at my cell, 250-250-3838.

Keep in touch and all my best wishes to you.

Wada Wada

最后，你的special thanks to xxx team 那段，不要放在这个给所有同事的电邮里，而是在这个电邮发出之后，再给那个部门的所有同事单独追发一个。